somehow this reminds me of some modern pop songs, but that's probably just me.
one thing i think could improve this song is to add another layer on top of the main melody to help compliment it.
also, your drum kick is pretty bass-y which is good but in this case i feel like it overpowers everything else a bit, including your bass. you should definitely try to up the power of your bass or maybe add in another bass layer.
overall, its not bad, the first transition made me think it would drop into an epic beat but it has a short slower part right before before it drops the beat.